More translation help wanted
od richardhall, 04. september 2007
Sporočila: 14
Jezik: English
erinja (Prikaži profil) 06. september 2007 18:52:06
Miland:PS. Correction - looking up Lord's book, the verb subvenci is applied(p14) to 'workshy parasites subsidised by rates' (a former local tax based on property). Lord uses maldungan kompenson for UB. But I would still stand by my use of the term.Wow, does he really use those words? That's an awfully political choice. In any case, the word "subvencii" has no negative connotations in Esperanto. The Esperanto definition given for it in the Reta Vortaro is "Provizi oficialan monhelpon" (to provide official monetary help). That can refer to a scholarship to a student, a grant for a project, or a check for an unemployed or poor person.
I think "subvenciata" as a translation for "on benefit" is fine. For an unemployment benefit, "maldunga kompenso" sounds fine to me, but for the more general "on benefit" (for any reason, not necessary unemployment), I think "subvenciata" is good, since it is more general. So I guess I agree with Lord's Esperanto choices, although I do not agree with his apparent politics!
Miland (Prikaži profil) 06. september 2007 20:50:27
erinja:Sorry, I should have explained that Lord is not expressing his own views - the passage is an imaginary conversation between two older man, a Grumpy Old Man and a more reasonable character.Miland:PS. Correction - looking up Lord's book, the verb subvenci is applied(p14) to 'workshy parasites subsidised by rates'Wow, does he really use those words? That's an awfully political choice... I guess I agree with Lord's Esperanto choices, although I do not agree with his apparent politics!
richardhall (Prikaži profil) 06. september 2007 21:41:17
piteredfan (Prikaži profil) 10. september 2007 02:34:09
richardhall:Thanks for all the suggestions. I'm still vexed by the translation of 'On benefit' though.vivante per senlaboreca pago
Let me trsnslate part of an old poem of mine, Beatle Music
It's no go the lunchtime crowd
Outside the Cavern,
Too old to get a job.
Too joung for the tavern.
Ho ve la meztaga amas'
Ekster la Kavern'
Tro maljuna por dungad'
Tro juna por la tavern'