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is this paragraph gramatically correct?

by 17colors, September 21, 2010

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mjdh1957 (User's profile) September 21, 2010, 10:58:00 AM

I would change the last part to 'trovi la dolcxan cxerizon.

Because, 'ili preferas rompi..., kaj trovi'