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is this paragraph gramatically correct?

od 17colors, 21. rujna 2010.

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mjdh1957 (Prikaz profila) 21. rujna 2010. 10:58:00

I would change the last part to 'trovi la dolcxan cxerizon.

Because, 'ili preferas rompi..., kaj trovi'