Ku rupapuro rw'ibirimwo

is this paragraph gramatically correct?

ca, kivuye

Ubutumwa 11

ururimi: English

mjdh1957 (Kwerekana umwidondoro) 21 Nyakanga 2010 10:58:00

I would change the last part to 'trovi la dolcxan cxerizon.

Because, 'ili preferas rompi..., kaj trovi'

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