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Could someone check my translation pleeeease :)

של Leke, 5 בדצמבר 2013

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שפה: English

Leke (הצגת פרופיל) 5 בדצמבר 2013, 19:22:28

Can you check these translations? Especially the "per" as I wasn't sure what was appropriate, unless "feed on" is like a compound verb where nutri alone is sufficient.

We feed on blood :: Ni nutras per sango.
We avoid sunlight :: Ni evitas sunlumon.
We rule the humans :: Ni regas la homojn. (would "Ni regas homojn" also be understandable?).

This is a task in part of a game. I'm trying to keep the sentences in a simple repetitive format ([Ni]+[1 verb]+[1 object]). The third sentence is kind of mixed, and player has to arrange some letters to some parts of words so that the sentence makes sense.

Thanks.

Benjamino (הצגת פרופיל) 5 בדצמבר 2013, 19:29:17

Leke:Can you check these translations? Especially the "per" as I wasn't sure what was appropriate, unless "feed on" is like a compound verb where nutri alone is sufficient.

We feed on blood :: Ni nutras per sango.
We avoid sunlight :: Ni evitas sunlumon.
We rule the humans :: Ni regas la homojn. (would "Ni regas homojn" also be understandable?).

This is a task in part of a game. I'm trying to keep the sentences in a simple repetitive format ([Ni]+[1 verb]+[1 object]). The third sentence is kind of mixed, and player has to arrange some letters to some parts of words so that the sentence makes sense.

Thanks.
I would say "Ni nutras nin per sango."

Other than that it looks fine to me!

Vespero_ (הצגת פרופיל) 5 בדצמבר 2013, 20:28:46

Leke:Can you check these translations? Especially the "per" as I wasn't sure what was appropriate, unless "feed on" is like a compound verb where nutri alone is sufficient.

We feed on blood :: Ni nutras per sango.
We avoid sunlight :: Ni evitas sunlumon.
We rule the humans :: Ni regas la homojn. (would "Ni regas homojn" also be understandable?).

This is a task in part of a game. I'm trying to keep the sentences in a simple repetitive format ([Ni]+[1 verb]+[1 object]). The third sentence is kind of mixed, and player has to arrange some letters to some parts of words so that the sentence makes sense.

Thanks.
When speaking about all of humankind, it's common to use "La homaro."

Leke (הצגת פרופיל) 5 בדצמבר 2013, 22:12:21

Vespero_:When speaking about all of humankind, it's common to use "La homaro."
So I guess that would be "Ni regas la homaron." as the plural is inferred?

Leke (הצגת פרופיל) 5 בדצמבר 2013, 22:13:51

Benjamino:I would say "Ni nutras nin per sango."
Yep, That makes more sense, thanks ridulo.gif

Nile (הצגת פרופיל) 6 בדצמבר 2013, 04:43:37

Or "Ni sinnutras/ninnutras", but you may want to avoid double consonants.

Tjeri (הצגת פרופיל) 6 בדצמבר 2013, 10:00:40

Ni nutriĝas ... is the most common use.

jismith1989 (הצגת פרופיל) 6 בדצמבר 2013, 11:14:48

Tjeri:Ni nutriĝas ... is the most common use.
Mi konsentas, vi pravas. Mi ĝin dirus tiel ankaŭ.

I agree, you're right. I'd say it like that too.

Benjamino (הצגת פרופיל) 6 בדצמבר 2013, 17:51:37

Vespero_:
Leke:Can you check these translations? Especially the "per" as I wasn't sure what was appropriate, unless "feed on" is like a compound verb where nutri alone is sufficient.

We feed on blood :: Ni nutras per sango.
We avoid sunlight :: Ni evitas sunlumon.
We rule the humans :: Ni regas la homojn. (would "Ni regas homojn" also be understandable?).

This is a task in part of a game. I'm trying to keep the sentences in a simple repetitive format ([Ni]+[1 verb]+[1 object]). The third sentence is kind of mixed, and player has to arrange some letters to some parts of words so that the sentence makes sense.

Thanks.
When speaking about all of humankind, it's common to use "La homaro."
"La homoj" is perfectly acceptable too.

For example, in SAT's definition of "oni":
* oni. Pron., signifanta «iu ne menciita persono»; «kelkaj aŭ multaj personoj»; «la homoj ĝenerale»

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