My first attempt at a "proverb"
от kaffirlily, 26 март 2012
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Език: English
kaffirlily (Покажи профила) 26 март 2012, 23:44:43
Are there more elegant ways to say this?
sudanglo (Покажи профила) 27 март 2012, 07:55:47
Usually in the Zamenhofian proverbs there is some rhyming or alliteration.
iom da vino, pli bona la patrino
Vino en la sango, pli indulga la lango
kaffirlily (Покажи профила) 27 март 2012, 08:19:35
And there WAS a rhyme there until I remembered my grammar and put the N-ending on "patrino". Sigh. So, I guess your first suggestion is closest to what I was trying to get at. Thanks. I have much to learn.