My first attempt at a "proverb"
kelle poolt kaffirlily, 26. märts 2012
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kaffirlily (Näita profiili) 26. märts 2012 23:44.43
Are there more elegant ways to say this?
sudanglo (Näita profiili) 27. märts 2012 7:55.47
Usually in the Zamenhofian proverbs there is some rhyming or alliteration.
iom da vino, pli bona la patrino
Vino en la sango, pli indulga la lango
kaffirlily (Näita profiili) 27. märts 2012 8:19.35
And there WAS a rhyme there until I remembered my grammar and put the N-ending on "patrino". Sigh. So, I guess your first suggestion is closest to what I was trying to get at. Thanks. I have much to learn.