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jkph00 (Profiel tonen) 9 november 2013 21:52:47
Thanks again!
RiotNrrd (Profiel tonen) 9 november 2013 22:48:10
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
erinja (Profiel tonen) 10 november 2013 11:40:26
jkph00 (Profiel tonen) 10 november 2013 13:06:28
RiotNrrd: festoAh, the wonderful effect of an "s" left out. Thanks for noting that. I corrected it. Erinja's suggestion of using vakera to describe the theme certainly makes sense, too. This language is so much fun!
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
sudanglo (Profiel tonen) 10 november 2013 13:59:12