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jkph00 (顯示個人資料) 2013年11月9日下午9:52:47
Thanks again!
RiotNrrd (顯示個人資料) 2013年11月9日下午10:48:10
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
erinja (顯示個人資料) 2013年11月10日上午11:40:26
jkph00 (顯示個人資料) 2013年11月10日下午1:06:28
RiotNrrd: festoAh, the wonderful effect of an "s" left out.
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.

sudanglo (顯示個人資料) 2013年11月10日下午1:59:12