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jkph00 (프로필 보기) 2013년 11월 9일 오후 9:52:47
Thanks again!
RiotNrrd (프로필 보기) 2013년 11월 9일 오후 10:48:10
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
erinja (프로필 보기) 2013년 11월 10일 오전 11:40:26
jkph00 (프로필 보기) 2013년 11월 10일 오후 1:06:28
RiotNrrd: festoAh, the wonderful effect of an "s" left out.
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.

sudanglo (프로필 보기) 2013년 11월 10일 오후 1:59:12