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jkph00 (הצגת פרופיל) 9 בנובמבר 2013, 21:52:47
Thanks again!
RiotNrrd (הצגת פרופיל) 9 בנובמבר 2013, 22:48:10
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
erinja (הצגת פרופיל) 10 בנובמבר 2013, 11:40:26
jkph00 (הצגת פרופיל) 10 בנובמבר 2013, 13:06:28
RiotNrrd: festoAh, the wonderful effect of an "s" left out.
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
![ridulo.gif](/images/smileys/ridulo.gif)
sudanglo (הצגת פרופיל) 10 בנובמבר 2013, 13:59:12