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jkph00 (Arată profil) 9 noiembrie 2013, 21:52:47
Thanks again!
RiotNrrd (Arată profil) 9 noiembrie 2013, 22:48:10
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
erinja (Arată profil) 10 noiembrie 2013, 11:40:26
jkph00 (Arată profil) 10 noiembrie 2013, 13:06:28
RiotNrrd: festoAh, the wonderful effect of an "s" left out.
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
Thanks for noting that. I corrected it. Erinja's suggestion of using vakera to describe the theme certainly makes sense, too. This language is so much fun! sudanglo (Arată profil) 10 noiembrie 2013, 13:59:12