Mesajlar: 5
Dil: English
jkph00 (Profili görüntüle) 9 Kasım 2013 21:52:47
Thanks again!
RiotNrrd (Profili görüntüle) 9 Kasım 2013 22:48:10
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
erinja (Profili görüntüle) 10 Kasım 2013 11:40:26
jkph00 (Profili görüntüle) 10 Kasım 2013 13:06:28
RiotNrrd: festoAh, the wonderful effect of an "s" left out.
Feto is something else entirely.
Other than that minor, and even kind of weirdly funny, detail, that's more or less how I'd write the sentence. I'd actually drop the hyphens everywhere except ĉi-vespere (kostumfesto, sovaĝokcidenta), but that's a stylistic choice on my part - your way is not wrong, nor is my way necessarily preferable.
Thanks for noting that. I corrected it. Erinja's suggestion of using vakera to describe the theme certainly makes sense, too. This language is so much fun! sudanglo (Profili görüntüle) 10 Kasım 2013 13:59:12